ZephR0's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos Girl II; Zone Zero]

Typo: When they reach the facility there is a typo. Can't remember it and I'm also too lazy to check again.

Very good, as expected!

[Chaos Girl]

Oooooooooooh, there is so much I missed by just watching the latest series of yours. So I guess this is the predecessor (is before) Chaos Eclipse? ... hmm. I'm constantly having revelations. =)

[Dead Detention #2.5]

I watched (and am watching) DD AFTER watching Alula Falling, Chronicle Bulletin and Chaos Eclipse. The girl in the last one I mentioned wasn't also named Subject 44?
Omg I have a hate/love relationship with you HABIT of connecting everything :))

Still.. AWESOME :)

[Dead Detention #1.5]

I decided to view the series because of some holes in my understanding of the next series which are connected (or may be) with this.
Blah... it doesn't matter :)

Cool! Also the buttons which take you to the chronologically correct following episode (1-1.5-2- so on) are very appreciated!

[Chaos Eclipse]

Very well-made. ;)

But...
DO YOU REALLY HAVE TO CONNECT ALL OF YOUR STORIES TO ONE ANOTHER? =)))
This gets me tired :O

JackAstral responds:

Thanks!

AND SORRY I JUST THINK IT'S KINDA COOL
L O L

[Devil's Gakuran]

Oh, the psycho feelings, the weird moments, the turns! This VN Is one of the best.
Very very emotional :'(
I'm glad it ended the way it did. But I was shocked about him hurting her :( Anyway, he had honor, as he even tried to kill himself to compesate his mistakes. Glad she stopped him.
Sorry for spoiling a bit, but this visual novel is AWESOME! :D

KoltonKennedy responds:

Thanks, man!
Heheh you should've put a *spoiler alert

[Chronicle Bulletin After Story]

Very nice series.
Very dramatic ending :'( ... but I love this.

One thing I have to say, shortly, which is the connection between CB and DD 2 ? (Chronicle Bulletin and Dead Detention2 ) - I happen to not have viewed DD or DD2, but I still want to know a "sip" of the info without having to wander trough the DD1&2 series which as I see happen to have a lot of episodes.
So, short explanation, please :D

JackAstral responds:

After The Moon King and Clear Moon head to New York, they perform an operation- the events of Dead Detention 2. The After Story for Dead Detention 2 takes place directly after the ending scene to this game, and shows Sora meeting her old friends again

[Cat in Japan]

Amazing mix of difficulty and easyness (you don't have to understand me ;) ) Aces high!

優れました !
(I'm not Japanese, though.)

[Wanderer]

This game made me shout like a crazy man. Especially the last level being very hard - you have to guess your path - . The story is small, and resembles just a philosophic thought. You need more to be able to take on this theme.. like a story with characters. The song fits the story but the game is a piece from another puzzle trying to forcely mix with them. The only element of the game itself that fits the theme is the darkness.

Shortly: Too much emotion (story+song) for a little game.
Some reference: Take example from 08jackt, who is amazing at dramatizing the most profitables areas of his games. (Alula Falling 5 ending, and Chronicle Bulletin). Sorry if I'm driving your fans away. ;) Your work is still very good for your level.

*Sorry for typos, if they are.

onnig90 responds:

Thanks for the review. The game was made for a 2 day game jam, so I did the best I could with my abilities within that time frame. I wanted it to be much longer and elaborate, but I started running out of time, so I had to cut it short.

[Sons of Guns]

Excellent game!

Half a star is missing for that misleading "Click banner to respawn" (and with it, the pay-to-win resemblance) :) You don't have to click it.
(I understand this typical urge for money ;) )

grmaster responds:

We don't planned button "respawn" and any ads, but... I doubt that you click the "donate" button, if we add it. Unfortunately, game sponsors are not interested in buying these types of games.

You can pass all game without respawn.

Thanks for 4.5/5. We welcome your suggestions and ideas.