ZephR0's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Forget the Bard!]

Very nice!
The only disadvantage of this game is that it's text-based. You have to reeeaaaaad your way trough the story to understand it. This is a pinch of dust compared to the well-written plot.

hotdogtopus responds:

LOL! Thanks. This was designed for shorter attention spans. The next game will be short, but I think you'll like the plot better.

[Chaos Girl II; Zone Zero]

Typo: When they reach the facility there is a typo. Can't remember it and I'm also too lazy to check again.

Very good, as expected!

[Chaos Girl]

Oooooooooooh, there is so much I missed by just watching the latest series of yours. So I guess this is the predecessor (is before) Chaos Eclipse? ... hmm. I'm constantly having revelations. =)

[Dead Detention #2.5]

I watched (and am watching) DD AFTER watching Alula Falling, Chronicle Bulletin and Chaos Eclipse. The girl in the last one I mentioned wasn't also named Subject 44?
Omg I have a hate/love relationship with you HABIT of connecting everything :))

Still.. AWESOME :)

[Dead Detention #1.5]

I decided to view the series because of some holes in my understanding of the next series which are connected (or may be) with this.
Blah... it doesn't matter :)

Cool! Also the buttons which take you to the chronologically correct following episode (1-1.5-2- so on) are very appreciated!

[Chaos Eclipse]

Very well-made. ;)

But...
DO YOU REALLY HAVE TO CONNECT ALL OF YOUR STORIES TO ONE ANOTHER? =)))
This gets me tired :O

JackAstral responds:

Thanks!

AND SORRY I JUST THINK IT'S KINDA COOL
L O L

[Devil's Gakuran]

Oh, the psycho feelings, the weird moments, the turns! This VN Is one of the best.
Very very emotional :'(
I'm glad it ended the way it did. But I was shocked about him hurting her :( Anyway, he had honor, as he even tried to kill himself to compesate his mistakes. Glad she stopped him.
Sorry for spoiling a bit, but this visual novel is AWESOME! :D

KoltonKennedy responds:

Thanks, man!
Heheh you should've put a *spoiler alert

[Chronicle Bulletin After Story]

Very nice series.
Very dramatic ending :'( ... but I love this.

One thing I have to say, shortly, which is the connection between CB and DD 2 ? (Chronicle Bulletin and Dead Detention2 ) - I happen to not have viewed DD or DD2, but I still want to know a "sip" of the info without having to wander trough the DD1&2 series which as I see happen to have a lot of episodes.
So, short explanation, please :D

JackAstral responds:

After The Moon King and Clear Moon head to New York, they perform an operation- the events of Dead Detention 2. The After Story for Dead Detention 2 takes place directly after the ending scene to this game, and shows Sora meeting her old friends again

[Cat in Japan]

Amazing mix of difficulty and easyness (you don't have to understand me ;) ) Aces high!

優れました !
(I'm not Japanese, though.)

[Wanderer]

This game made me shout like a crazy man. Especially the last level being very hard - you have to guess your path - . The story is small, and resembles just a philosophic thought. You need more to be able to take on this theme.. like a story with characters. The song fits the story but the game is a piece from another puzzle trying to forcely mix with them. The only element of the game itself that fits the theme is the darkness.

Shortly: Too much emotion (story+song) for a little game.
Some reference: Take example from 08jackt, who is amazing at dramatizing the most profitables areas of his games. (Alula Falling 5 ending, and Chronicle Bulletin). Sorry if I'm driving your fans away. ;) Your work is still very good for your level.

*Sorry for typos, if they are.

onnig90 responds:

Thanks for the review. The game was made for a 2 day game jam, so I did the best I could with my abilities within that time frame. I wanted it to be much longer and elaborate, but I started running out of time, so I had to cut it short.